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Beautiful Mind
Oh beautiful mind,
Why can't you be controlled?
Your prideful ideas kill.
Your hurtful words rolled.
Off the tongues of many victims.
Hopelessly ensnared.
You capture.
You destroy.
So many tremble at your thoughts.
Your actions cause remorse.
You make the certain doubt themselves.
If not by pride, by force.
Oh that beautiful mind,
Which once was lost, and is now found.
Weave your awful web of lies.
And bury your victims far underground.
Oh beautiful mind,
Why can't you be controlled?
Your prideful ideas kill.
Your hurtful words rolled.
Off the tongues of many victims.
Hopelessly ensnared.
You capture.
You destroy.
So many tremble at your thoughts.
Your actions cause remorse.
You make the certain doubt themselves.
If not by pride, by force.
Oh that beautiful mind,
Which once was lost, and is now found.
Weave your awful web of lies.
And bury your victims far underground.
This was written just as a boredom thing (my dad was making me watch college basketball). So it's not as good as I would like, but here it is.
© 2012 - 2024 kgallamore817
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heh, i like it 
, its flowy, not amarching rythm more of a flowing stream, and the imagery and idea.....makes MY mind smile you have incredible ideas, and you do a really good job of putting them into words 
, its flowy, not amarching rythm more of a flowing stream, and the imagery and idea.....makes MY mind smile you have incredible ideas, and you do a really good job of putting them into words